its now very important for us to raise voice against female foeticide. so plz come together and try to root out this..
this is the poem written by me..beti ki pukar...
ek beti jise janam hote hi maar diya jata h...m expressing her feelings through this poem..
beti ki pukar
maa mujhe na chodo..
maa mujhe na chodo..
mere bhi kuch sapne hain..
jo mere apne hain..
ghar aangan mehakaon main..
ghar main khushiyan laon main..
maa mujhe na chodo..
maa mujhe jeene do..
ek nanhi si kali thi..
ghar aangan main aane ko thi..
maa ki khushi ki seema na thi..
pita k sukh ka aant na tha..
jab tak unhe gyaat na tha..
ki main ek ladki hoon..
par ye kya hua..
mera beti hona unke liye abhishaap hua..
maa tere garbh main..9 mahine maine apne ko dhala..
is pyaari si duniya ko dekhne ka sapna rach dala..
uss ishwar ne kathin praytann se mere ek ek ang ko sanwara..
par ye kya maa....
tune mujhe pehle din hi maar dala..
apni nanhi ungaliyon se tera haath padakti main ma..
apni athkheliyon se tujhe khush kar deti main maa..
mujhe jeene diya hota maa...
tere hi sajeev roop ko main dhaaran kar leti maa..
tere diye sanskar se ek nayi duniya banati main maa..
bete ki tarah main bhi vansh chalati maa..
mujhe jeene diya hota maa..
mujhe jeene diya hota..
kitty
very well written Kirti i must admit that u r a superb writer and of ourse a very sensitive person.keep writing buddy
ReplyDeletehey thanks yavnika...
ReplyDeletethanks kirti for ue response take care and keep writing and keep in touch too.
ReplyDeletevery touchy poem indeed..!! i like ur choice of words. keep blogging :-)
ReplyDeletekeerti... very nice lovely heart touching lines...
ReplyDeletesuper
:-):-):-)
~smile
thanks frnds...
ReplyDeleteSimply superb!
ReplyDeleteFabulous work Kitty...Proud of U :)
thanks nikki..my sweetheart..
ReplyDeleteNice thought..
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no words about these poem. aapko bahut bahut dhanywad is kavita ko likhne k liye. is kavita ko padhne k baad mujhe bahut acha laga koi to hai jo is subject k baare me sochta hai.
ReplyDeleteYou have done nice job, nice thought & very pretty.
ReplyDeleteHey great poem...nice read
ReplyDeleteIt was really heart-touching..Thanks for it
Very awesome poem..
ReplyDeletei think u shud post this thread on JFC
So nice.. :)
ReplyDeleteya alok iz ryte, post it @ JFC..
waoooooooo..........excellent thought
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ReplyDeleteVery touching poem.. There needs to be more awareness on the issue.
ReplyDeletesimple gr8. blog ...really u picture the present of indian female through this blog....love to read it many time...
ReplyDeletehi keerti,
ReplyDeletemene padha apki poem,me yahi janana chahta hun esa kyun hota hai socha hai.mene notice kiya hai jo ladki ko bhoj ya jo bhi galt sochta hai vo khud hi ek aaurat hote hai jo yahi releasie krate hai ladki hona hi ek paap hai.
ladhki to apne papa ki kreb hi rahte hai par koi to hai jo use dur kr deta hai. srry agr galt laga hoto bcoz i feel dt, isliye kaha.
Duniya itne buri bhi nahi hai,isi duniya ladhkiyon ko hatho par bhi rakh jata hai.